Chloe's Diagram 😺😺

 

I was learning to write  a Explanation about how bees make honey. First we had to choose a topic  there was lots and lots of topics to choose from I chose  how do bees make honey.Then we had to plane it after that we had to write a first , second and third paragraf.And then we write it on a slide to fixed up all the mistakes and then did a checklist to make sore that it was right and then I put it on my blog.

I found it easy to color in the words red I also found it easy to find the pitchers and color and to copy and paste .And to do the arrow get the bees and to write the words because all I had to do is go to my drafts and copy and paste  it.    

I really enjoyed learning new facts about how bees have a tongue that is like a straw.I also enjoyed  making the bee and the flowers and writing facts about how do bees make honey. And how it takes 300 bees about three weeks to gather 450 g of honey. I also enjoyed choosing what I what to write about bees because I know a bit about bees so it was fun and that made it easy. 

I found it hard to write a purpose for my DLO. And to write the conclusion about what I am talking about.  All I had for my conclusion is We all know that bees collect the nectar from the  flowers and then go back to the beehive and make the honey.

Next time I need to use more year 6 writing and  and longer paragraphs for my writing.And I could use a better strategy to make me work faster so that I can get it done. And use more color and decoration to make it look a bit more exciting.